Not too bad
This film is pretty good, but it had some major flaws.
a) The script made no sense, and you really should have edited out the netspeak and slang such as "Sup" and "U". Those aren't words. :)
b) The plot was all over the place, never reaching a conclusion or flowing properly.
c) I personally despised the music.
Anyway, good work for making a flash based on your mmorpg of choice. It's refreshing to see someone who's dedicated to what they like. Plus you get one for interactivity cos you added a scene selection menu. 4/5 to you, and nice work!