A short critique
was quite clear to me
while watching this flash that you simply did not try hard enough.
Obviously when it comes to drawing and animation, you are
though your writing capabilities are
well below the standard.
All I can suggest is that you practice and
refine your craft, and hopefully it will improve as a result.
Considering this is the #1 rated flash on newgrounds, it would seem
ordinary for it to be a work that appeals equally to all audiences.
My best regards, and I wish you good luck on your next work.