A short critique
Well, it
was quite clear to me
while watching this flash that you simply did not try hard enough.
.
Obviously when it comes to drawing and animation, you are
unbelievably talented,
though your writing capabilities are
well below the standard.
All I can suggest is that you practice and
refine your craft, and hopefully it will improve as a result.
.
Considering this is the #1 rated flash on newgrounds, it would seem
ordinary for it to be a work that appeals equally to all audiences.
My best regards, and I wish you good luck on your next work.